Angel of Death

Hey Ky, Alas, I am reading the second to the last chapter, and it is pretty sad that its over but I am so happy for you! Well anyways, I ...

Hey Steam! I just really wanted to read this, just to give you a bump. I didn't finish it because for some reason I can't focus, so I'll read it ...

I like this! I love houses with that gloomy old Victorian look. Your NaNo sounds so awesome too. I hope you make it to 50,000. ~Angel

Hey Jig! Its so great to read something new of yours. I just happened to look in Science Fiction and here this was. Well anyways, I can't help you grammar ...

This is quite lovely but I think you could do so much more with this. It flows nicely and everything but considering the comparison of you and someone else to ...

Hey KJ! Sorry I couldn't get to this earlier. And thanks for the critique on Midnight to Dawn, it was really helpful and I'm going to officially start editing over ...

Yes, if they give me six months, I will hurriedly edit and do a lot with my NaNo. I will go into super hibernation to see my month of hard ...

So Nate is the reason behind this madness! I'm still calling you Snoink, though.

Yeah, maybe I can do without the color red. I wasn't completely attached, anyway. ha ha I used a basket? Okay now I see where people might think this is ...

Hey Ky, thanks for the heads up. Ah its been a wonderful journey with you. I'm so happy that you're almost done but it makes me sad that I won't ...

Thanks all for the critiques, they were much appreciated and I will edit soon. Well to answer everyone's suspicions or whatever you'd like to call them, this is not Fanfic ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for heads up! This was another great chapter and I wish it could be longer. Well I didn't see too many problems but I liked it! Ann's ...

Haven't posted here in a while but I just found a part that I think is worthwhile. There is a couple of sentences in here that I love ^_^ A ...

Oh you sound so awesome! And your username is exquisite, I wish I could trade! I'm Angel by the way *nice to meet you* I love reading and seeing as ...

Welcome to YWS, Steam! I'm Angel and from now on Steam is your nickname because 1. Your username is a mouthful er...handful 2. Everyone here has a nickname, and if ...